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Since i attended my english class for one week already, now i am going to post my first ever guneine argumantative essay .the title is "The government should give aid to the less fortunates,but some people argue that we should teach them how to fish not give them a fish.What do you think?"
The financial crisis have swept over the world in the recent years.Hence, the supplement of allowence to the less fortunates in this global calamity from the government has become a popular issue amongst the public.However, the disputation against this policy has appeared as some people think that government should provide employment to them rather than merely giving an allowance .As a matter of fact, several factors should be taken into account when implemting this policy.
Financial conditions should be considered precisely as it displays the wealth of a country.Compared to a developed country,a developing country 's national treasury will be definitely weaker to assist the less fortunate due to the tardy development of its economy.Moreover, the provision of allowance without control may lead to an economic collapse.A government who is failed with malversation is not advised to provide allowance to its citizens as it may worsen the economic condition of the country.Apart from this, the aid to the less fortunate should also depend on the global pecuniary condition.
The propotion between population and employment opportunities decides the employment rae in a country.The enhancement of technology in a developed country has brought about the mechanization in every industry.As a result,the unemployment rate in a dveloped country will surely be higher than developing countries which mainly rely on labour.
The provision of allowance should be appropriate as it may cause the laziness amongst the public.Humanity is realistic thus human will prefer to sit at home when the can earn money in both ways.Feeling of unfairness existing in the labour class may create a social turmoil.
All in all,the aid to the less fortunate do bring contributions to the development of a country when it is implemented in the right time and right place.